Some feedback on our groups footage so far, and what happens next:
- In todays lesson we discussed with our peers and teachers a way of improving the footage we have filmed so far.
- Firstly, the problem recognised is the change in time and light from the scene of the walk home, the scene filmed in the house. The reason behind this is because the school camera is not effective enough to film in the dark - to tackle this challenge is to adjust the brightness and contrast when editing our footage.
- Some positives from our footage is the two lines of action of the walk of the protagonist home, and a scene of the antagonist walking around the house that the protagonist is walking to.
- For what happens next, our group needs to go on another shoot and add more shots to build suspense up until the climax of the action at the end of the sequence.
- For example, we know we now need to include more POV shots from the point of view of the protagonist so that the audience can get an understanding of what he is looking at each time he continues around the house.
- Further, we need to include an establishing shot for our last scene to give the audience a greater understanding of what the film is about and what happens next.