LLM and HG: Rough Cut

 

 

Strengths:

• Style of shots in the kitchen scene
• The continuity editing throughout the sequence
• Parallel lines of action at the beginning, between the antagonist in the house and the male protagonist walking home
• The fade of the radio to the song and from when the song cuts in the kitchen scene

Ways to improve:

• The sequence is a bit to long to begin with, so we need to go through it and cut parts we feel we don't necessarily need
• In the shot of the antagonists point of view, we have cut a little too late where the effect has gone before we have moved onto the next shot
• More sound needs to be added, to build up tension and anchor some shots